關(guān)于英國(guó)留學(xué)推薦信結(jié)尾的8個(gè)反面例子
很多中國(guó)留學(xué)生在準(zhǔn)備英國(guó)留學(xué)推薦信的時(shí)候，到了結(jié)尾就開(kāi)始松懈不注意細(xì)節(jié)了，而英國(guó)留學(xué)推薦信虎頭蛇尾的結(jié)局，往往會(huì)給英國(guó)大學(xué)的招生老師留學(xué)很不好的印象，下面就來(lái)看看英國(guó)留學(xué)推薦信結(jié)尾的8個(gè)反例吧。
英國(guó)留學(xué)推薦信最后一段應(yīng)包含的內(nèi)容，主要是推薦人對(duì)被推薦人各種能力、品質(zhì)、潛質(zhì)的總結(jié)及對(duì)被推薦人的美好祝愿。
本書(shū)作者結(jié)合多年的咨詢(xún)和改稿經(jīng)驗(yàn)，總結(jié)了一些同學(xué)們?cè)趯?xiě)推薦信時(shí)經(jīng)常出現(xiàn)的問(wèn)題。這些內(nèi)容及事例由于不現(xiàn)實(shí)或?qū)懙娜颂�，已�?jīng)對(duì)申請(qǐng)起不到任何好的作用，因此，作者把它們列出來(lái)，希望同學(xué)們少寫(xiě)或不寫(xiě)這些內(nèi)容，而去挖掘更能突出自己個(gè)性的東西來(lái)寫(xiě)。請(qǐng)注意，以下所列舉的內(nèi)容，都是許許多多申請(qǐng)者經(jīng)常用到的語(yǔ)言和內(nèi)容，如果你也落入這樣的俗套，你的推薦信會(huì)顯得千篇一律，很難讓讀者有興趣讀完。
1.無(wú)數(shù)的推薦信都寫(xiě)被推薦人上課時(shí)積極表達(dá)自己的觀點(diǎn)，下課后還繼續(xù)與教師討論學(xué)術(shù)問(wèn)題，但是談?wù)撌裁磫?wèn)題，卻總是沒(méi)有具體的例子。如：
In class, she was an active participant, often raising incisive questions and providing solutions to problems. We often discussed new and more efficient solutions to a problem. Always actively participating in class, asking perceptive and challenging questions
2.為了用事例說(shuō)明被推薦人不斷地汲取各種知識(shí)，很多推薦人都在推薦信中這樣寫(xiě)道：我經(jīng)常看見(jiàn)XXX在圖書(shū)館閱讀各類(lèi)專(zhuān)業(yè)圖書(shū)和英語(yǔ)雜志。但是在圖書(shū)館學(xué)習(xí)是一個(gè)學(xué)生日常生活的一部分，正如一個(gè)司機(jī)在開(kāi)車(chē)，一個(gè)農(nóng)民在地里干活并不能說(shuō)明他們與別的司機(jī)或者農(nóng)民有什么不同，更不能說(shuō)明有什么值得稱(chēng)道的。
Very often I find her reading concentratedly in the library with books or English periodicals in his hands.
3.很多同學(xué)找到自認(rèn)為很有價(jià)值的推薦人寫(xiě)推薦信，但是他們以前并不相識(shí)或者熟悉，為了在信中制造一個(gè)他們相識(shí)的合理情況,他們都用同樣的事例：被推薦人參加了推薦人的一次講座，講座結(jié)束或中間休息或上課時(shí)，被推薦人向推薦人提出了一些很有挑戰(zhàn)性的問(wèn)題，于是推薦人就對(duì)被推薦人留下了深刻的印象。同上面的'例子一樣，這樣的事例缺乏真實(shí)性。教授們?cè)谥v座結(jié)束后往往只有幾分鐘的時(shí)間回答很多同學(xué)的提問(wèn)，他不可能對(duì)某位同學(xué)留下特別的印象。即使是真實(shí)的，也因?yàn)樘嗟娜诉@么寫(xiě)，失去了可信度。
I first noticed Mr. Xie in 1999, when I gave a lecture to students majoring in microelectronics. At the end of the presentation Mr. Xie approached me and asked several perceptive and challenging questions, which demonstrated his vast background knowledge and swift grasp of the ideas I had expounded
4.有些推薦信的內(nèi)容太荒唐了，讓人不敢相信。
As his advisor, I was immediately impressed by his enthusiasm and diligence towards his studies. Several times I would telephone him before seven in the morning, only to find his dormitory mates sleepily answering that he had left for his studies.
5.語(yǔ)言太夸張，完全失去了說(shuō)服力。有的推薦信把被推薦人寫(xiě)的比推薦人水平還高。讀完這樣的推薦信，外國(guó)教授不禁要想，既然這位同學(xué)的水平如此之高，他就不需要再進(jìn)修了。而且一般推薦人都為被推薦人的老師及上司，這樣寫(xiě)也讓外國(guó)教授懷疑推薦人的水平。
In my numerous years of teaching experience rarely have I seen as talented or dedicated a student as Mr. Liu. I consider him my own source of inspiration.
6.為了表明被推薦人做事細(xì)致認(rèn)真，推薦人總是喜歡在推薦信中提到：他總是第一個(gè)到實(shí)驗(yàn)室，最后一個(gè)離開(kāi)。這樣的事例幾乎是每位申請(qǐng)者要寫(xiě)到的內(nèi)容。試想一下，如果你是錄取委員會(huì)的成員，你天天都讀到同樣的內(nèi)容，你會(huì)是什么樣的感覺(jué)。
The first to arrive and the last to leave, she took pride in making sure that everything was in order and well maintained.
7.為了表明被推薦人學(xué)習(xí)態(tài)度端正，推薦人喜歡在推薦信中舉例說(shuō)明：他總是坐在教室的第一排聽(tīng)講。這也不見(jiàn)得就是一種美德。坐在后面的同學(xué)都是不努力的嗎?
He would often sit within the first few rows, frequently raising questions and clarifying concepts that were unclear to him/I first became acquainted with Mr.Wang at my lecture, where he sat in the first row and impressed me with his full concentration and enthusiastic participation in class discussions
8. 為了說(shuō)明被推薦人勤奮好學(xué)，推薦人經(jīng)常在推薦信中寫(xiě)到這樣的事實(shí)：被推薦人總是要求推薦人推薦一些相關(guān)的書(shū)籍，或是被推薦人向推薦人借書(shū)看。這樣的事例太雷同了，缺乏獨(dú)特性。
To broaden his intellectual horizons, he has often asked me to introduce books and journals for him to read. Actually, he had borrowed so many books from my personal collection that he left quite a large part of my bookcase empty.
以上就是中國(guó)留學(xué)生在英國(guó)留學(xué)推薦信結(jié)尾經(jīng)常會(huì)犯的八個(gè)錯(cuò)誤，如果之前的內(nèi)容和結(jié)果都還寫(xiě)得不錯(cuò)，卻在英國(guó)留學(xué)推薦信結(jié)尾犯錯(cuò)，整篇推薦信就是功虧一簣了。所以細(xì)節(jié)要至始至終。
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